kia ora this is my wirting
Once upon a time there was a great big green monster. He always came out of the light dark swamp,
his buddy name taylor.
They both come to the surface,Before sunset they say mean things to the animals and the animals
hate when they say mean things to us.The king wants to tell a story about why they are mean to us but
we didn't want to hear it but he just said to never go bit “A long time ago the swamp brothers were alive
for 100 years there mum and dad died from keep them safe from a war.
That's how it all came to this moment. Their family was mean and mad all the time my great grandfather
told me never ever go by these monsters they will make your dreams not come true that's all i know so
the end”.
All of the animals came together and made a plan to get the monsters to stop saying mean things to us
if you want to know how they become mean is that when we went to the circus of animals. They came
and ripped down the circus and said “NO MORE LOUD NOISES IM SLEEPING IN MY SWAMP
GRRRR” this was last week this happened we all was upset and sad bcs the best bit was coming.
They all was so mad at the dark green light monsters.
All of the animals scared the monsters away so they can not come to us again when we are having
a great time.The hole thing was ruined so we had to do it broken and we didn't see what was going to
happen if the rain came we live next to the swamp and our houses make loud noises if we cook,sleep,
and if we have a sickness.
All of the houses were changed now because all of us animals hated those houses so we have ruined
them for good. All of the animals lived outside because they love fresh air.
The animals have good smells of what is going to happen outside the forest,they say to themselves
be grateful for what you have.No one can hurt them but only the great big monster.(8 weeks later)
one of the animals said “LOOK HUMANS THERE GOING TO ATTACK US” we all ran to our secret
hiding spot.
The humans were looking at how this is so ugly and green.We all jumped out and said
“HEY GO SOMEWHERE ELSE AND DO THAT THIS IS SWAMP LIFE” The humans laughed at us
and said “bahahaha talking animals what a joke”.
All the animals were so mad that they were going to fight the humans but there just animals but there
kinda strong from all the hard work there being doing for the last couple of years and months.But the
humans didn't care at all the went pass them and said “we don't care we will never care about this
ugly forest we well burn it to pieces so i well be looking out”.
All the animals, even the monsters, looked out for fire about time the fire came. We have all the water
that we need.Animals were fighting the fire and getting as much water as we can.Once they settle
down they all became best friends
To be continued……
Come back another time!!
I really like the use of the punctuation you have used Alexis.I also like that you used paragraphs.It made your story easy to read.
ReplyDeleteWell done and thanks for sharing.
I am going to go out and do some weeding soon.What have you been doing during lock down?.