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Friday, August 20, 2021

Ocean Olympics!

 Ocean Olympics!!

In the Olympics race everyone was getting ready to race one by one everyone was talking at the surface but no one was going underwater yet the bossy mean person her name was Stella her last  name was Stella Bella she is the 1st person in every single race she says that she can beat anyone even if they are fast some people bet her but she was still 1st this race.


 is going to be epic.Some people look like her like she is a queen but n there mind they say “ugh why is she here again why her i really wanted to win this time” the only person that didn't say anything in there mind was bob brown he is the unlucky one he doesn't win at all but he doesn't care at all. 


  “someone is coming to win '' that's what she said Stella Bella (EVERYONE GO TO THE STARTING LINE!) Everyone went to the racing line getting ready to race under water and got all of their gear on.No one was looking at Stella because she was yelling out  “YOU ALL GOING TO LOSE AND I'M GOING TO WIN!!!” .


Everyone gasp and looked at her but at the starting line she was all geared up and what i saw was something that can go to place to place but you have to say it it can also cornet under water but when bob brown was going to win in his  mind he said “this girl cant not win this time she is so cheating i hate them people they should not be racing just to win this much dollars she is so not going to win this time” (IN 3,2,1 GO!!) everyone went fast and fast but Stella Bella cheater when (When Stella Bella the cheater was so close to the finish line she didn't know that 2 

sharks come her way that's the hard bit to get past.When everyone stopped and watched to see if she would get past how? Well her whatever magic ya it broke done.Some people went  past the sharks well the sharks let them (never cheat because you will never get ahead). Everyone went to the next race and biked up to a far hill but people were getting so tired their legs.bob brown was zooming fast and getting to the racing line some people were 2nd and 3rd no one was 4th or 5th or anything. So 5 hours later everyone was so happy because so much people were there even when their family was there too.(After 10 hours of putting everything up for her birthday)by the why. Stella was only with her friends shopping for the 10 hours she came back and. Said “OMG THIS IS LIKE I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY!!” but her mum and dad was not there no one was there she was only shouting out to no one he eyes were closed so of course she couldn't see why did she say that it's because one of her friends said  look it's your favorite color birthday (her favorite color is pink nothing can stop her liking pink). Her mum said that she was only having a pink birthday party because it is your favorite color.(she opened her eyes and she looked so shocked of what her eyes are seeing right now) Everyone was hiding and then surprise her with this cool birthday party.All of her family and aunt and best friend came and her cousins came everyone came well some Stella Bella knew that cheating is bad and her friend said “happy birthday Bella wish you are happy big BIRTHDAY” Bella  was so happy to see everyone (at the talking bit) Her best friend said “I'm so happy i saw you as  a kid and now you are like this its so wonderful we are best friends and we well be forever sometimes we had some fights but we got over  it and i'm happy that you don't cheat in races now So thanks for being my best friend Stella” (after all of her friends went now its mum and dads turn to talk)  When dad was talking in Stella's brain (i really want to eat the cake now but i have to wait for my mum and dad to go i'm just take a little bite maybe uh i don't know okay i won’t i want be so greedy) Dad said when he was talking “Awe my little darling ha grown  she has been so much to me and no one can take my little baby down she is always with me or her mum aka my wife anyways i'm done with my talk i'm go to the bathroom (on bobs side of the family he was 1st place so he well be happy and sharing how he did it at some trading school luxury) Bob said “hello everyone im bob i was the man who win first place in the underwater Olympics” Everyone was shocked at that school everyone was super rich Anyways so much people were shocked that they get to see him in real life but they never got a chance to take them to the place where they did the race well let's go back to bob talking “Anyways someday i will take you to the place were we raced and maybe we will show you some things we did off camera and show how low and deep it is in the water and i well show you the things i got and i will talk to Stella Bella  if she wants to come with us she may say no because its her birthday today i mean she well be really busy on the day we will go there  when she is not busy.Some people were coming to the school and when bob was on the street so much people were shouting out “OMG ITS HIM CAN I TAKE A PIC WITH YOU” (After that) .Everyone was being friends and always was nice and never cheated in a race so much people won a race and no one was being mean together so today and the another days always be nice to one another  

To be continued... 


1 comment:

  1. You've got lots of great ideas Alexis.I like the use of punctuation and paragraphs.It sounds like Stella isn't a very nice person.

    May I suggest that you re-read your work and when you need to take a breath,add a full stop or a comma.
    I look forward to reading part 2.

    Thanks for posting and keep safe in your bubble with your whanau.

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